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MAY 5, 2025 | DAVID PLAHM

A Triptych

A Triptych

SUMMARY

Date
05-05-25
Title
A Triptych
Topic

A three-panel poem tracing the arc from devastating personal loss (wreckage, grief, silence) through spiritual rescue and the discovery of a transformative muse, to renewal—the honeybee finding nectar again after the devastation.

Summary

True to its title, this poem unfolds in three distinct panels. The first—”Wreckage / Post Death”—is among Plahm’s rawest writing, cataloging loss through labeled devastations: “Domestically Deaf” (the silence of an emptied home), “Traumatically Floored” (joys shattered on self-laid tiles), “Disoriented Meaning” (a void where purpose once bloomed), “Future Missing” (tomorrow’s dreams dissolved to dust). Each label functions like a clinical diagnosis of heartbreak, lending forensic precision to emotional chaos. The pivot comes with “Only my Faith / Saved me”—a declaration of spiritual ground beneath the rubble. The second panel, “Unbelievably,” charts the arrival of the muse as resurrection. The line “You are / The most singular soul / I’ve never met” is arrestingly paradoxical—deep devotion for someone not yet physically encountered. The imagery shifts from wreckage to treasure: cracker jack prizes, pirate chests, pots of gold. The third panel, “Afterlight,” completes the cycle with organic imagery—dust nourishing soil, seeds sprouting, the honeybee ready to search again. The self-identification as the honeybee ties the poem directly to the Honey Bee Bard persona, making this piece feel like origin story. The closing question—”Do we push up daisies? / Or nourish roses”—frames the entire poem’s journey as a choice between death and cultivation.

MAY 5, 2025 | DAVID PLAHM

A Triptych

A Triptych

MAXIMS

Date
05-05-25
Title
A Triptych
Maxims
""You are the most singular soul I've never met.""
""Only my faith saved me—pulled from the wreckage, I stand on firm ground.""
""Do we push up daisies? Or nourish roses.""
MAY 5, 2025 | DAVID PLAHM

A Triptych

A Triptych

RATING

Date
05-05-25
Title
A Triptych
Rating
★★★★☆
8

An emotionally ambitious poem that earns its epic scope through raw honesty. The triptych structure gives the piece genuine dramatic architecture—devastation, rescue, renewal—and the labeled sub-sections in the first panel (“Domestically Deaf,” “Traumatically Floored”) create a formal scaffolding that contains what might otherwise be overwhelming grief. The paradox of “The most singular soul / I’ve never met” is one of Plahm’s most memorable lines, capturing the strange modern reality of deep connection without physical presence. The transition from clinical devastation to playful treasure imagery (cracker jack box, pirate island) demonstrates impressive tonal range within a single poem. The “Afterlight” section’s identification of the poet as honeybee seeking nectar elegantly ties personal narrative to the broader Honey Bee Bard project. Where the poem occasionally falters is in its middle section, which accumulates metaphors for the muse’s value without always deepening them—the treasure images, while charming, feel slightly catalogued rather than developed. The closing question is perfect: concise, stark, and resonant. A deeply personal poem that functions simultaneously as autobiography, love letter, and artistic manifesto.

A Triptych

Treasure

Afterlight

Wreckage

Post Death

It was a stark ending, memories incinerated—
The ashes choke the breathless air.

Domestically Deaf
The unbearable silence of home, only ghosts left wandering—
The echoes are cold and lonely.

Traumatically Floored
On my knees, devastated, only splintered emotions left—
My joys shattered on the tiles I laid.

Disoriented Meaning
Overwhelming loss and grief, truth drained from my life—
A void where gardens and blooms of purpose once lived.

Future Missing
Our plans, our vision, erased—
Tomorrow’s dreams dissolved, now only dust blowing into silence.

I Cry
In desperation and loneliness—
Directionless, my heart is destitute.
The loss of you drowns my soul in grief.

Only my Faith
Saved me. I stand on firm ground—
The redemption of my life.
Pulled from the wreckage.

Unbelievably
I don’t believe
You understand
How much
You’ve reshaped
My life.

It’s a renewal,
A rebirth,
An awakening,
A resurrection.

Each glimpse – more beautiful,
Lighting my path forward,
Each step – more essential.

You are
The most singular soul
I’ve never met.

Simply put,
I hope
We share
A future.

I cherish you,
Yearn to see you.
My muse,
You fill my thoughts, ignite my sleeping pen.

It’s simple, it’s you.
You’re the prize in my cracker jack box,
The treasure chest on my pirate island,
The pot of gold at my rainbow’s end.

Unbelievably,

You calm the tsunamis-
Up, Down, Sideways,
Let’s enjoy the ride,
Seize the gold,
Shine your light,
For us,
Don’t let it fade away.

There is a vast openness
To the future of antiquity
I am compelled
To explore
That beautiful,
Singular Soul.

That!
Is simple devotion.

Afterlight

Afterthought, aftertrauma,
The dust settles to the ground,
Nourishes the soil
Seeds sprout,
Stirred by a breeze that renews,
Light lifts from the horizon.
The honeybee – me,
Is ready,
Always in search of nectar.
Life is renewed.

Ha!
Fancy that.

Life lives, nectar found,
My pen still moves, inspired again
By my muse.
Do we push up daisies?
Or nourish roses.

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