taste of honey

reviews & ratings of
this month's new works

08 October 2025

After an Excellent Workout / Uncorked Champagne

★★★★½
9/10
Rating Description: Exuberant and sensory-rich. The cascade of bubble imagery creates genuine momentum, carrying the reader through a fizzy journey from gym to reverie. The “poetic Möbius strip” concept is...
06 October 2025

The Cat that Never Came Back

★★★★
8/10
This poem showcases David Plahm’s gift for narrative voice and unexpected tenderness. The cat persona is fully realized—cocky, sensory-driven, unapologetically hedonistic—yet the poem earns its emotional payoff by revealing vulnerability...
05 October 2025

A Repository for a Stray Thought

★★★½
7/10
This poem embodies the playful, unguarded spirit that defines much of David Plahm’s work. Its charm lies in its refusal to take itself too seriously while still delivering genuine moments...
03 October 2025

Dreaming

★★★★½
9/10
“Dreaming” is one of David Plahm’s most lush and accomplished pieces—a sustained rhapsody that earns its length through relentless image-making and genuine emotional escalation. The poem’s strength lies in its...
02 October 2025

My Tears

★★★★
8/10
“My Tears” demonstrates the power of restraint. At just over 20 lines, it accomplishes what many longer poems cannot: it creates a complete emotional arc—from obscured vision to clarity, from...
01 October 2025

Cause & Effect: The Lady, the Sand, the Result

★★★★
8/10
This is an ambitious poem that takes real structural risks. The pairing of a simple love note with an extended autobiographical allegory creates productive tension—we understand the hug in the...
01 October 2025

My Lovely Lady

★★★
6/10
“My Lovely Lady” is intentionally slight—and therein lies both its charm and its limitation. The poem succeeds completely at what it sets out to do: express gratitude with warmth and...
29 September 2025

You Are/The One

★★★★
8/10
“You Are/The One” is an interesting formal experiment that mostly succeeds. The decision to present two versions of essentially the same poem creates a kind of call-and-response effect, allowing readers...
28 September 2025

Cuteness

★★★★
8/10
“Cuteness” is delightful in its specificity. Where many love poems content themselves with generalities (eyes, lips, hands), Plahm goes granular: dimpled knees, freckled toes, a quivering little finger, a perking...
28 September 2025

My Plant Named Lady

★★★½
7/10
“My Plant Named Lady” is an unusual entry in the collection—deliberately simple where other poems are lush, deliberately childlike where others are complex. This is both its strength and its...
28 September 2025

Art(ificial)

★★★½
7/10
“Art(ificial)” is one of Plahm’s most conceptually ambitious poems, built around a typographical conceit that allows “Art” to mean multiple things simultaneously. The wordplay is genuinely clever: the parenthetical formatting...
28 September 2025

Sacred Light

★★★★
8/10
“Sacred Light” is one of Plahm’s most accomplished love poems, achieving a sustained lyricism that justifies its title. The choice of candlelight as central image is inspired—it provides warmth without...
26 September 2025

Inside is Precious

★★★★
8/10
A quietly elegant piece that rewards close attention. Plahm demonstrates restraint here—the short, breath-like lines create a meditative rhythm that mirrors the act of appreciating someone fully. The progression from...
24 September 2025

The Loving Embrace

★★★★½
9/10
This poem showcases Plahm at his most tactile and emotionally exposed. The conceit of hands as the central image proves remarkably versatile—carrying weight both literal and metaphorical across the poem’s...
24 September 2025

Nectar Bytes & Thorns

★★★★
8/10
An ambitious piece that successfully marries the aphoristic with the personal. Plahm’s “nectar bytes” concept—wisdom fragments earned through experience’s thorns—provides a unifying framework that holds the poem’s varied modes together....
22 September 2025

Charlie (A Pantry Portrait)

★★★½
7/10
A playful, surprising little poem that demonstrates Plahm’s range beyond the romantic and metaphysical. The central conceit—eulogizing a can of tuna—is handled with genuine wit, and the poem earns its...
21 September 2025

I’ll Never Know

★★★★
8/10
A hypnotic meditation on romantic obsession that succeeds through sheer emotional honesty. The incantatory repetitions (Oh—Yes—No—Woe—My) could feel gimmicky but instead create genuine momentum, building toward the devastating final surrender....
20 September 2025

A Rush

★★★★
8/10
A compact, emotionally resonant piece that accomplishes more with less. The short, breath-like lines create a sense of urgency that mirrors the subject matter—the rush itself. Plahm wisely resists over-explaining;...
19 September 2025

The Unicorn’s Dance: Science and Soul

★★★★
8/10
An ambitious piece that succeeds by embracing its own contradictions. The prose sections risk breaking the spell of the poetry, but Plahm handles the transitions with surprising grace—the scientific framing...
18 September 2025

Painter as a Poet/Poet as a Painter

★★★
6/10
A deliberately raw, experimental piece that prioritizes spontaneity over polish. The opening question about Michelangelo and Shakespeare carries genuine intellectual weight, and the list of paradoxical emotional states (relaxing yet...
18 September 2025

Every—

★★★★
8/10
A masterclass in compression. This tiny poem punches well above its weight, using the familiar currency of time and money to make an unfamiliar point feel fresh. The repetition of...
18 September 2025

A Shirt

★★★★
8/10
A deceptively simple piece that accomplishes more in twelve lines than many poems do in fifty. The paired haiku structure creates a satisfying call-and-response effect: first the speaker examines their...
17 September 2025

Aurum

★★★★½
9/10
A sumptuous, unapologetically romantic poem that commits fully to its golden conceit and is richer for it. The blazon tradition—cataloguing the beloved’s beauties—is handled with fresh energy, and the medieval...
15 September 2025

Bertha’s Broadside

★★★★
8/10
A joyously irreverent piece that finds the sacred in the profane—or at least in the fluorescent-lit aisles of Walmart. Plahm’s gift for wordplay is on full display: the “berth/Bertha” pun,...
09 September 2025

Sunny Beaches and Calm Breezes (I Wish)

★★★★
8/10
A powerful illness narrative that earns its epic scope. The cascading natural disasters could feel excessive, but Plahm maintains control through the tight parallel structure and the gradual inward movement...
08 September 2025

Captured

★★★★
8/10
A masterfully structured poem that earns its emotional payoff through disciplined escalation. The opening stanzas accumulate dread with cinematic precision—wild animal, criminal, roadkill—while the refrain’s variations (“exposed,” “caught,” “stripped,” “drained”)...
06 September 2025

A Kiss Rose

★★★★
8/10
A charming, playful exploration of romantic awakening that succeeds through its central conceit: the “Kiss Rose” as both object and action, gift and genesis. The dense rhyme scheme (rose/nose/glows/flows/knows) creates...
06 September 2025

Are You?

★★★★
8/10
A tender, devotional lullaby that succeeds through its deliberate pacing and liturgical structure. The meta-framing—explicitly instructing the reader how to receive the poem—could feel gimmicky but instead creates genuine warmth,...
06 September 2025

Lady Slicker the Kicker

★★★★
8/10
An exuberant, percussive love poem that uses athletic imagery to capture devotion’s physical intensity. The triplet repetitions create genuine rhythmic propulsion—reading it aloud feels like a stadium chant building toward...
01 September 2025

When You Know (Something More)

★★★★
8/10
A tender, layered meditation on what makes someone truly beautiful. The poem’s structure—surface observation deepening into philosophical inquiry—mirrors the act of coming to know another person over time. The anaphoric...
30 August 2025

Foundation

★★★★
8/10
A winningly self-deprecating celebration of bodily acceptance disguised as comedy. The poem’s structure—absurdist list building toward philosophical pivot—demonstrates Plahm’s skill at hiding wisdom inside humor. The Fred Flintstone reference and...
29 August 2025

Do You Know?

★★★★
8/10
A tender check-in poem that earns its emotional weight through gentleness rather than grandeur. The anaphoric “You do know” opening establishes intimacy—the speaker isn’t declaring anything new but reminding the...
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