taste of honey

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31 March 2026

Your Smile / Beautiful, You, and Me

★★★½
7/10
A short interrogative lyric whose primary accomplishment is the four-option opening question about what the Muse’s smile actually is, and whose primary structural limitation is the closing stanza’s verbatim reuse...
31 March 2026

Seduction / The Way Forward Is a Child's Watercolor Smile

★★★★½
9/10
One of the catalog’s most allusion-rich poems in the recent stretch and the piece in which the speaker’s resistance to the seductive descent is delivered through the unexpected interruption of...
30 March 2026

Three Candles / Help Me Light the Wick

★★★½
7/10
A short interrogative lyric whose primary accomplishment is the structural rhyme between the three-name dedication and the three-candle close, and whose primary structural limitation is the absence of any specification...
30 March 2026

Space / Astronaut Means Star Sailor

★★★★
8/10
A short diptych whose primary accomplishment is the structural relationship between its two stanzas, with the reader required to construct the connection rather than being told what it is. The...
30 March 2026

Age / Till I Love You and Love Me

★★★★
8/10
A short philosophical lyric whose primary accomplishment is the closing pairing of “love you / and / love me” as the catalog’s quietest admission that the speaker’s full appreciation of...
28 March 2026

Unlocked / The Inner Dawn

★★★★
8/10
A short morning meditation whose primary accomplishment is the catalog’s most compressed delivery of its central argument about inner versus outer beauty in months. The piece operates as the speaker’s...
27 March 2026

An Evening Out / Lived in Reality Not a Poem

★★★★
8/10
A formally distinctive piece whose primary accomplishment is the genre-honesty that gives the piece its structural credibility. The catalog has been operating in line-broken verse across the recent stretch—the meditations,...
24 March 2026

If / Your Home Is My Heart

★★★★
8/10
A short commitment poem whose primary accomplishment is the precise distinction between promise and commitment in the middle, and whose primary structural risk is the brevity that may leave the...
24 March 2026

The Third Drawer / Do I Need to Know

★★★★★
9/10
A distinctively gothic piece in which the catalog’s recurring meditation on inherited material is rendered as sustained slow-horror narrative. The three-handle architecture is the poem’s primary structural device, and the...
23 March 2026

I Have No Clue / A Gift of Future Poetry

★★★★
8/10
A short meditation whose primary accomplishment is the catalog’s most accessible piece of practical wisdom in months and one of the more charming uses of an ordinary domestic object as...
18 March 2026

Gentle Gravity / How Gently You Pull Me

★★★★★
9/10
One of the most fully realized short poems in the recent catalog and the piece that delivers the catalog’s central argument about the Muse’s irreducibility in its most precise form....
16 March 2026

I Curve Toward You / The Loveliest Distance Between Two Points

★★★★½
9/10
One of the most sustained meditations on a single geometric figure in the recent catalog, and the piece in which the catalog’s recurring interest in spiral, curve, and natural geometry...
15 March 2026

My Broken Fingernails (Still Sharpen the Pencil)

★★★★½
9/10
One of the most fully realized short poems in the recent catalog and the piece that pairs most directly with “Uncomposed” from earlier in the month. Both poems are about...
13 March 2026

Uncomposed / Almost Poems

★★★★½
9/10
A late-twilight meditation whose primary accomplishment is the catalog’s most precise self-diagnosis of its own production process. The “almost poems” framing is the catalog’s bravest admission in months that the...
09 March 2026

Maybe— You / Two Travelers Still

★★★★½
9/10
One of the most fully realized poems in the recent catalog and the piece in which the speaker’s two-traveler metaphor finally arrives at its most precise rendering. The two-traveler trope...
09 March 2026

WooHoo! / Eighty-Four and Still in the Game

★★★★
8/10
A folk-narrative poem whose primary accomplishment is the catalog’s most extended comic narrative in months and one of the catalog’s rare ventures into rhymed-quatrain singable form. The piece does what...
06 March 2026

Judgments Wound / Arrows Sheathed

★★★★½
9/10
One of the most structurally ambitious poems in the recent catalog and the piece in which the catalog’s recurring meditation on judgment versus mercy finds its fullest realization. The two-half...
04 March 2026

Ha! for Her / A Mother's Laugh Remembered

★★★★½
9/10
One of the catalog’s most emotionally precise composite poems and the piece that quietly bridges two of the body of work’s central female figures—the mother and the Muse—through the single...
02 March 2026

Poetry @ 3:12 AM / Flame or Contagion Is My Coffee

★★★★
8/10
A composite document whose primary accomplishment is the meta-meditation on the creative state, delivered in both prose and verse and timestamped at the hour of its production. The piece is...
02 March 2026

Shout! / Just an Extension of My Imagination

★★★½
7/10
A short poem whose primary accomplishment is the descent into solipsistic doubt about the Muse’s reality—an unusual move for the catalog, which has spent hundreds of poems arguing for her...
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