
Ah, Only You
(My Muse, can create this) Frame of mind
A short, declarative love poem that defends the speaker's body against its own diminishment—arms that are not weak, lips that are not cold—and reclaims each part as a vessel of meaning, connection, and a word the speaker has never truly known yet feels so deeply, offered only to the Muse.
The poem operates through a rhetorical structure of negation-then-affirmation: “My arms are not weak” → they hold strength and you; “My lips are not cold” → they convey something profound. Each body part is first defended against what it might be mistaken for (fragile, disposable, chalky, lifeless) and then revealed as what it actually is (embracing, promising, warm, truthful). The method borrows from the tradition of the blazon—the poetic catalog of the beloved’s body—but inverts it: instead of cataloging the Muse’s features, the speaker catalogs his own, arguing for their worth as instruments of devotion.
The arms stanza is the more physically grounded of the two: “They hold not only strength, but also you” places the Muse alongside physical capability as something the arms carry. “Every hug is important” is a statement so plain it borders on manifesto—in a catalog that has produced cosmic conflagrations, gravitational collapses, and synesthetic crossings, the insistence that an ordinary hug matters is its own kind of radicalism. “Silent but unwavering” closes the stanza with the two qualities the hug shares with the best promises: it doesn’t speak, and it doesn’t flinch.
The lips stanza shifts from the physical to the verbal: “Not pieces of chalk. Lifeless and cold” is a startling comparison—chalk is the material of temporary marks, of messages that erase, of classrooms where knowledge is provisional. The lips, the poem insists, are the opposite: warm, vibrant, permanent in their emotional truth. “They speak the truth. And express the depth of my feelings” is unadorned declaration, and the unadorned quality is deliberate—the lips that are warm and vibrant demonstrate their warmth by refusing ornament.
The confessional pivot—”A testament to a word I have never … truly known. / Yet I feel so deeply”—is the poem’s most emotionally loaded passage and its clearest connection to the catalog’s central wound. The ellipsis before “truly known” is a held breath, a hesitation before admitting the gap: there is a word (love, presumably) that the speaker has never fully experienced in its reciprocated form but has felt with overwhelming depth from one direction. The paradox—knowing without knowing, feeling what has never been confirmed—is the Muse relationship’s defining condition, stated here without metaphor or deflection.
The closing couplet—”Nothing is true / Without you”—is a six-word philosophical absolute. Truth itself requires the Muse’s presence to exist. The statement is either the most romantic or the most terrifying thing a person can say: if nothing is true without her, then her absence is not just loneliness but the collapse of reality itself.
A poem that earns its emotional impact through directness rather than imagery. The negation-then-affirmation structure (not weak → strong; not cold → warm) gives each body part a small dramatic arc: the reader encounters the diminished version first and then watches it be redeemed, which creates a rhythm of rescue that mirrors the speaker’s understanding of what the Muse does for him. The chalk comparison for lips is the poem’s most original image—unexpected, slightly uncomfortable, and precisely chosen: chalk is dry, temporary, educational rather than emotional, everything the speaker’s lips refuse to be. “Every hug is important” is a line that risks banality and survives through the conviction of its placement: after the defense against fragility and disposability, the plain statement lands with the authority of something fought for rather than assumed. The ellipsis in “a word I have never … truly known” is the poem’s best formal gesture—a visible pause that performs the gap it describes, the speaker reaching for a word and finding the space where reciprocation should be. The closing couplet is a heavy load for six words, and it holds: “Nothing is true / Without you” operates simultaneously as love declaration, existential claim, and philosophical absolute, and the line break between “true” and “Without” creates a momentary standalone statement—”Nothing is true”—before the qualifier arrives. Where the poem stays in familiar territory is in the middle stanzas’ language, which relies on abstractions (profound, depth, deep connection, bond) more than the specific physical or sensory detail that distinguishes the catalog’s strongest work. The arms and lips are named but not described in action—a scene of one specific hug, one specific whispered word, might have given the abstract qualities a body to inhabit. But the poem knows its scale: it is a short, sincere, undecorated declaration, and the closing couplet is strong enough to carry everything that precedes it. A poem that proves the shortest distance between two people is a sentence without metaphor.
My arms are not weak. Fragile and disposable. They hold not only strength, but also you. Every hug is important. An embrace of meaning. A connection of promise and support.
Silent but unwavering.
My lips are not cold. They truly convey something profound.
Not pieces of chalk. Lifeless and cold.
But, warm and vibrant with emotion.
They speak the truth. And express the depth of my feelings.
Each word they whisper is from my soul.
A bond of deep connection.
A testament to a word I have never … truly known.
Yet I feel so deeply.
Only, for beautiful you.
My Lady.
Nothing is true
Without you.
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"Musings to a Muse"
This poem is part of a 28-page poetry collection by David Plahm, released in
December 2024. The "Musings to a Muse" collection is now available in hardcover and ebook.
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