
Ah, Only You
(My Muse, can create this) Frame of mind
A ten-line Valentine that traces a single smile's journey from the beloved's face to the speaker's heart, where it builds a permanent home and never leaves—the entire experience of falling in love compressed into one sentence and one breath.
The poem is a single sentence distributed across ten lines, and the distribution is the poem’s formal achievement. Each line break adds a beat of delay between the smile’s origin and its destination, so that the reader experiences the instant the title names not as a flash but as a slow-motion event—the way a moment of falling in love feels simultaneously instantaneous and eternal.
The opening—”A beautiful smile / From you”—identifies the cause with radical simplicity: a smile, from you. No context, no setting, no circumstance. The poem strips away everything that isn’t the smile and the person who produced it. “Can make / A home” is the line pair that carries the poem’s entire metaphor: the smile doesn’t visit the heart; it builds a residence there. The verb “make” is active, constructive—this is not a feeling that settles passively but one that builds, furnishes, moves in. A home is permanent infrastructure, not a hotel room.
“In my / Heart” places the home’s location across a line break that isolates “Heart” as both the end of a phrase and the beginning of a new emphasis. The enjambment forces the reader to pause at “In my”—a moment of vulnerability, the speaker opening the door before naming the room.
“and Never / Ever / Leave” is the poem’s emotional payload, delivered in three descending steps that hammer the permanence into place. “Never” is strong; “Ever” reinforces it; “Leave” completes it. The three words function as nails driven into the home the smile has built—each one securing the structure more firmly. The line breaks give each word its own weight, its own breath, its own finality.
“Thank You Valentine!” is the closing and the poem’s only punctuation—an exclamation mark that releases the tension the preceding nine lines accumulated. After the slow-motion descent from smile to heart to permanence, the thank-you arrives as both gratitude and relief: the speaker has received something permanent, and the only adequate response is to name the occasion and say thank you. The exclamation mark is not volume but joy—the sound of a man who has just realized the smile isn’t leaving.
The poem’s relationship to the catalog is one of distillation. Where “I Collapse in a Smile” took thirty lines to trace the Muse’s smile through an entire biography, “In an Instant” reduces the same event to its chemical formula: smile + heart = home. The earlier poem was the feature film; this is the photograph.
A poem that proves ten lines and one sentence can carry genuine emotional weight when every line break is load-bearing. The single-sentence structure is the formal decision that makes the poem work: by refusing to stop, the sentence enacts the continuity it describes—the smile that enters the heart and never leaves is mirrored by a sentence that enters the first line and never pauses until the thank-you. The enjambments are precisely placed: “Can make / A home” splits the verb from its object, creating a moment of suspense (make what?); “In my / Heart” isolates the location across two lines, making the reader arrive at the heart the way the smile does—after a beat of anticipation; “and Never / Ever / Leave” gives each word of the permanence claim its own line, its own breath, its own emphasis. The “home” metaphor is the poem’s most original contribution to the Muse-and-smile thread: where “I Collapse in a Smile” described the smile’s effect as gravitational collapse and “Framed in Air” described it as a shimmering afterimage, this poem describes it as residential—the smile moves in, unpacks, stays. The Valentine closing is well-timed, arriving as both label and gratitude without overstaying. Where the poem is limited by its brevity is in the absence of any complicating element: the smile arrives, makes a home, never leaves, thank you. The trajectory is unimpeded, which makes it sweet but also simple—there is no resistance, no doubt, no moment where the home’s foundation is tested. The catalog’s strongest smile poems (“I Collapse in a Smile,” “Resonance”) earn their wonder by placing an obstacle or a mystery before the payoff. But as a Valentine’s card—which is what the closing identifies it as—the poem fulfills its occasion perfectly. A Valentine doesn’t need complication; it needs conviction. And this one has conviction in every line break. A poem that builds a house in the time it takes to smile.
A beautiful smile
From you
Can make
A home
In my
Heart
and Never
Ever
Leave
Thank You Valentine!
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"Musings to a Muse"
This poem is part of a 28-page poetry collection by David Plahm, released in
December 2024. The "Musings to a Muse" collection is now available in hardcover and ebook.
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