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DECEMBER 15, 2024 | DAVID PLAHM

Is There Anything That is Just a Flower?

Is There Anything That is Just a Flower?

SUMMARY

Date
12-15-24
Title
Is There Anything That is Just a Flower?
Topic

A rhyming meditation on interdependence—the world wouldn't have a rose without prose, wouldn't have a smile without love, wouldn't have fragrance without sun and rain—that argues nothing exists in isolation, everything beautiful requires something else to make it so, and the Muse's prose is to the rose what sunlight is to growth.

Summary

This poem is Plahm’s most formally traditional piece—a rhyming, metered love poem that reads like a hymn or a lullaby, its couplets rolling with the regularity of a rocking chair. The title asks a question the poem spends sixteen lines answering: no, there is nothing that is just a flower. A flower is the sum of everything that made it—sun, rain, soil, time—and by extension, beauty is the sum of everything that nourishes it: prose, love, grace, wisdom.

The opening couplet—”The world would not have a rose / If not for your prose”—is the poem’s foundational claim and its most compressed argument. The rose/prose rhyme is not merely sonic; it’s logical. The rose (beauty, nature, the visible) depends on the prose (language, meaning, the written). Without someone to name the rose, to write about it, to give it significance beyond botany, the rose is just a plant. The Muse’s prose—her words, her stories, her wisdom—is what transforms the natural into the meaningful. This connects to the catalog’s recurring insistence that the Muse is not merely a subject but a co-creator: she doesn’t just inspire the poems; her own words and presence are the precondition for beauty to exist.

The three-stanza structure mirrors the three elements the poem identifies as necessary for a rose: the prose/wisdom of the Muse (stanza one), the love/grace that fills the heart (stanza two), and the sun/rain that makes things grow (stanza three). Each stanza follows the same pattern: “The world would not have” (negation) followed by a catalog of what that absence would cost, followed by the condition that prevents the absence. The repetition is deliberate—this is a poem that argues through accumulation, each stanza adding another layer of interdependence until the reader understands that nothing is self-sufficient, not even a rose.

The closing couplet pivots from the universal to the intimate: “I hope your sleep is filled with repose / And all that has gone is what you have chosen.” The rose/repose rhyme closes the phonetic circle the poem opened, and “repose” carries both its literal meaning (rest, sleep) and its connection to the rose—repose contains “rose” inside it, the flower hidden in the rest. The final line—”all that has gone is what you have chosen”—is the poem’s most philosophically loaded statement, a wish that the beloved’s losses are only the ones she selected, that nothing was taken from her without consent. It’s a prayer for agency disguised as a goodnight wish.

DECEMBER 15, 2024 | DAVID PLAHM

Is There Anything That is Just a Flower?

Is There Anything That is Just a Flower?

MAXIMS

Date
12-15-24
Title
Is There Anything That is Just a Flower?
Maxims
""The world would not have a rose if not for your prose, nor the wisdom that it shows.""
""Without the love that fills the heart and the grace that sets it apart.""
""I hope your sleep is filled with repose, and all that has gone is what you have chosen.""
DECEMBER 15, 2024 | DAVID PLAHM

Is There Anything That is Just a Flower?

Is There Anything That is Just a Flower?

RATING

Date
12-15-24
Title
Is There Anything That is Just a Flower?
Rating
★★★☆☆
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A poem that chooses a formal register—end-rhymed couplets, regular meter, hymn-like repetition—and commits to it without apology. In a catalog that typically operates in free verse with deliberate structural looseness, this piece stands out for its formal discipline, and the discipline is appropriate to the poem’s argument: interdependence requires structure, each element supporting the next, each rhyme depending on its partner the way the rose depends on the rain. The rose/prose opening is the poem’s most inventive rhyme and its strongest philosophical claim—the idea that language is a precondition for beauty, not just a description of it, connects to the ars-poetica thread (“Truth,” “The Critic I Am,” “Bleed While We Shape the Desert”) while operating entirely within the love-poem register. The three-stanza repetition (“The world would not have”) creates a liturgical quality that suits the poem’s devotional content—this is a hymn to the Muse dressed as a meditation on flowers. The closing repose/chosen couplet is the poem’s most emotionally complex moment: the embedded “rose” inside “repose” is a buried formal pleasure, and the wish for chosen losses rather than inflicted ones carries a weight that transcends the poem’s gentle surface. Where the poem stays in comfortable territory is in its middle stanzas, which rely on conventional pairings (joy/worthwhile, sun/grow, rain/glow) that don’t carry the imagistic surprise of the catalog’s strongest work. The rhyme scheme, while consistent, occasionally leads the content rather than serving it—”And the rain that makes it glow” is sonically satisfying but botanically imprecise (rain makes things grow; light makes things glow). But the poem’s formal commitment is itself a statement: in a world of free verse and half-baked margins, sometimes the bravest thing a poet can do is rhyme on purpose and mean every couplet. A poem that proves a rose by any other rhyme scheme would not smell as sweet.

Is There Anything That is Just a Flower?

Illustration of a deep rose-red rose in bloom with faint handwritten script in the petals, golden veins, and silver dewdrops suggesting prose, sun, and rain

The world would not have a rose
If not for your prose
Nor the wisdom that it shows
Without the words that touch my soul
And the stories that make me whole
The world would not have a smile
Nor the joy that makes it worthwhile
Without the love that fills the heart
And the grace that sets it apart
The world would not have a rose
Nor the fragrance that it blows
Without the sun that makes it grow
And the rain that makes it glow
I hope your sleep is filled with repose
And all that has gone is what you have chosen.


Musings to a Muse

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"Musings to a Muse"
This poem is part of a 28-page poetry collection by David Plahm, released in December 2024. The "Musings to a Muse" collection is now available in hardcover and ebook.
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