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JANUARY 10, 2025 | DAVID PLAHM

You Too

You Too

SUMMARY

Date
01-10-25
Title
You Too
Topic

A ten-line poem structured as a syllabus of personal power—four kinds of knowing (intelligence, smarts, intuitiveness, street smarts) arranged as a logical progression from birthright through learned application through synthesis to survival skill—addressed to the Muse with the closing instruction: trust yourself.

Summary

The poem reads like a diagram the speaker drew on a napkin to explain something he needed the Muse to understand about herself. The structure is a ladder with four rungs, each rung carrying a term and its definition, and the definitions build on each other with the logic of a proof.

“Intelligence / A birthright” is the foundation. Intelligence is not earned, not studied for, not achieved—it is inherited, arrived with, present from birth. The word “birthright” carries legal and biblical weight: a birthright is something that cannot be taken away, that belongs to the holder by the fact of existence rather than the fact of effort. The speaker is telling the Muse that her intelligence is not something she acquired; it is something she was born owning.

“Smarts / A learned application of intelligence” builds the second level. Where intelligence is raw material, smarts are what you make with it. The word “application” is from the vocabulary of engineering and design—applying intelligence means putting it to use, directing it at problems, converting potential into function. Smarts are intelligence with a job.

“Intuitiveness / The combination of those first two which leads to” is the synthesis—intelligence (the innate) plus smarts (the learned) producing something greater than either: the ability to know without being able to explain how you know. The definition’s phrasing (“the combination of those first two”) is deliberately analytical, the speaker mapping the Muse’s gifts the way a designer maps a system. Intuition isn’t mystical here; it’s mathematical. It’s what happens when birthright and education multiply each other.

“Street Smarts / The ability to survive in a dangerous world” is the summit. After intelligence (given), smarts (learned), and intuitiveness (synthesized), street smarts is the operational output: the capacity to navigate danger. The word “dangerous” is the poem’s only adjective that carries threat, and its placement at the end of the progression reveals the poem’s underlying concern—the speaker is not delivering a compliment but a survival briefing. The world is dangerous. The Muse has the tools to survive it. The poem exists to make sure she knows that.

“Trust yourself” closes the poem with two words that convert the entire syllabus from description to instruction. The four kinds of knowing are useless if the knower doesn’t trust them. The imperative is the poem’s emotional payload: the speaker has mapped the Muse’s intelligence, smarts, intuition, and street smarts, and the only thing missing is her confidence in her own equipment. “Trust yourself” is not advice; it is a command delivered by someone who has watched the Muse doubt what she shouldn’t doubt.

The title—”You Too”—is the poem’s quietest and most important word. “Too” implies that someone else already possesses these qualities, and the poem’s project is to insist that the Muse possesses them as well. She is not lesser, not lacking, not dependent on someone else’s intelligence. She has her own. You too.

JANUARY 10, 2025 | DAVID PLAHM

You Too

You Too

MAXIMS

Date
01-10-25
Title
You Too
Maxims
""Intelligence—a birthright. Smarts—a learned application of intelligence.""
""Intuitiveness—the combination of those first two. Street smarts—the ability to survive in a dangerous world.""
""Trust yourself.""
JANUARY 10, 2025 | DAVID PLAHM

You Too

You Too

RATING

Date
01-10-25
Title
You Too
Rating
★★★★☆
7

A poem that operates as a blueprint rather than a lyric—each term placed precisely, each definition building on the last, the entire structure engineered toward a two-word conclusion that carries the emotional weight the preceding eight lines assembled. The designer’s mind is visible in the indented definitions, the logical connectives (“which leads to”), and the progression from innate to learned to synthesized to operational. The poem treats intelligence the way an architect treats load-bearing walls: each type supports the one above it, and removing any one would compromise the structure.

The four-term taxonomy is the poem’s intellectual contribution, and it holds up to scrutiny: intelligence without application is unused potential (birthright unclaimed); smarts without intuition are mechanical; intuition without street smarts is vulnerable to exploitation; and all four without self-trust are tools left in a locked box. The progression is not merely additive but multiplicative—each level doesn’t just add to the previous one but transforms it.

“Trust yourself” is the closing’s strength and the poem’s emotional center—two words that reveal the entire taxonomy was built to support a single instruction. The speaker didn’t map the Muse’s intelligence to flatter her; he mapped it to show her that her equipment is complete and her doubt is unnecessary. The poem is an act of empowerment disguised as a diagram.

Where the poem’s analytical structure limits its emotional range is in the absence of a scene, a moment, a specific instance of the Muse deploying any of these four kinds of knowing. A stanza showing her intuition in action—reading a room, making a decision, navigating the dangerous world the poem names—might have given the taxonomy a heartbeat. But the poem’s format is deliberate: it is a note passed across a table, a quick sketch on a napkin, a message that needs to be understood immediately rather than savored slowly. The two-word closing doesn’t need elaboration because the eight lines preceding it were the elaboration. A poem that proves the best instruction manual is the one that ends with: now use it.

You Too

Clean architectural illustration of four ascending platforms from solid sandstone through amber glow to vivid teal radiance with a single footprint at the top

You Too

Have

Intelligence
A birthright
Smarts
A learned application of intelligence
Intuitiveness
The combination of those first two which leads to
Street Smarts
The ability to survive in a dangerous world

Trust yourself.

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