
Ah, Only You
(My Muse, can create this) Frame of mind
A New Year's Eve catalog poem that surveys thirteen kinds of people at midnight—bungee divers, mountain jumpers, stargazers, newborn celebrants, sad ones beginning again, California dreamers, family huggers—before the speaker separates himself from the crowd in the final lines: he is the one dreaming of a future yet to be unveiled, and he hopes the Muse is too.
The poem is a crowd scene rendered as anaphora—thirteen “Some are” statements that pan across humanity at the stroke of midnight, each one a snapshot of a different way to enter a new year. The catalog’s range is the poem’s structural argument: the new year means something different to every person alive, and the poem insists on holding all thirteen simultaneously rather than privileging one over another.
The first four statements escalate in physical and metaphysical daring: bungee diving into a raging river (physical risk), jumping off a never-ending mountain (greater physical risk), rocketing to the stars of tomorrow (cosmic ambition), mind expanding into the vast unknown (interior exploration). The progression traces a journey from the body’s adrenaline through the species’ ambition to the individual mind’s frontier, each “Some” reaching further than the last.
The middle statements shift from the adventurous to the tender: celebrating a newborn, witnessing the celestial, turning inward to family. The newborn stanza—”celebrating the newborn who is born anew”—is the catalog’s most compressed paradox: a baby born on New Year’s is literally born into newness, the newest person in the newest moment, and the redundancy (“newborn” + “born anew”) is not sloppy but emphatic. “Some are sad from history past and hopefully have begun to begin anew again” is the catalog’s most emotionally complex entry—the triple beginning (begun to begin anew) captures the difficulty of starting over: you don’t just begin; you have to begin the beginning, and then begin again. The repetition enacts the effort it describes.
“Some are just chillin’, relaxed, California dreamin’, a mythical reality today” introduces the Mamas and the Papas without naming them, the song’s title converted from longing (the original “California Dreamin'” is about wanting to be somewhere warm while stuck somewhere cold) into present-tense contentment (the mythical California has become today’s reality). The shift from apostrophe-free “dreamin'” to the claim “a mythical reality today” collapses fantasy into fact.
The catalog narrows in its final entries: from the universal (“as we all should”) through the intimate (“hugging and kissing a future family”) to the singular: “Some are just dreaming of a loving smile from a beautiful Lady / One I personally know.” The word “personally” is the poem’s pivot from crowd scene to close-up. The thirteen “Some” statements were third-person observations; “One I personally know” converts the speaker from observer to participant. He is no longer surveying the crowd; he is standing in it, and his midnight dream is specific: one Lady, one smile.
The closing—”Some are dreaming … of a future yet to be unveiled / Like me. / And I hope, / You are too”—performs the New Year’s essential act: turning from the past toward the unknown. “Yet to be unveiled” treats the future as something that already exists behind a curtain, waiting to be revealed rather than created, which carries a fatalism softened by the word “hope.” The speaker doesn’t know whether the Muse shares his dream; he hopes. The hope is the poem’s last word on the relationship: not certainty, not despair, but the annual renewal of wishing.
A poem whose catalog structure suits its occasion perfectly—New Year’s Eve is the one night when all of humanity does the same thing (marks the transition) in a thousand different ways, and the thirteen “Some are” statements capture that simultaneity with genuine range. The escalation from bungee diving through stargazing through family hugging to personal dreaming traces an arc from the public and spectacular to the private and quiet, and the narrowing mirrors the experience of midnight itself: the fireworks belong to everyone, but the wish you make at the stroke is yours alone. The “begun to begin anew again” triple-start is the catalog’s most formally interesting phrase, the repetition enacting the exhausting effort of restarting a life that has already failed to start once. The California Dreamin’ reference is well-deployed—casual enough to be a passing thought, culturally loaded enough to import an entire mythology of longing-turned-real. The pivot from “Some” to “One I personally know” is the poem’s emotional hinge, and the word “personally” does the structural work of converting a crowd poem into a love poem in a single adverb.
Where the catalog occasionally stays in general territory is in the middle entries, which describe their “Some” people in broad terms (celebrating, witnessing, sharing) without the specific physical detail that distinguishes the strongest entries (bungee diving into a raging river, California dreamin’). The poem is most alive when the “Some” statements contain concrete action and most abstract when they describe states of being. The closing is well-handled—”And I hope, / You are too” is the right amount of vulnerability for a New Year’s poem: not a declaration but a wish, not a certainty but a hope, offered across the midnight line to someone who may or may not be listening. A poem that proves the best New Year’s resolution is the one you make about someone else.
It’s New Years!
Some people are bungy diving into a raging river
Some are jumping off a never-ending mountain
Some are rocketing to the stars of tomorrow
Some are mind expanding into the vast unknown
Some are celebrating the newborn who is born anew
Some are turned to the skies to witness the celestial celebration
Some turn inward to celebrate the personal experience of family
Some are sad from history past and hopefully have begun to begin anew again
Some are on a trek to the unknown and are totally excited
Some are just chillin’, relaxed, California dreamin’, a mythical reality today
Some are just sharing family, as we all should
Some are just hugging and kissing a future family that will be together forever
Some are just dreaming of a loving smile from a beautiful Lady
One I personally know. And definitely …
Some are dreaming … of a future yet to be unveiled
Like me.
And I hope,
You are too.
Happy New Year








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