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MARCH 23, 2025 | DAVID PLAHM

Effort

Effort

SUMMARY

Date
03-23-25
Title
Effort
Topic

A seven-line meditation on process over outcome—the argument that striving itself, not the prize, is where transformation and happiness reside.

Summary

This is Plahm at his most distilled. Seven lines, no imagery, no narrative, no Muse, no AGS—just a philosophical position stated with the quiet authority of someone who has earned it. The opening line—”I’m enjoying the effort”—is deceptively radical, particularly within a catalog defined by longing, suffering, and unrequited devotion. The immediate concession that “the prize may be out of reach” prevents the poem from reading as naive optimism; this is not a person who expects to win but one who has decided that winning is beside the point. The progression from effort to journey to process to striving maps a subtle conceptual escalation—each word slightly more active, more intentional than the last. The pivot line “Not because of the end goal” functions as a hinge, rejecting teleological thinking in favor of something closer to Zen practice or Stoic virtue ethics: the becoming is the purpose. Read within the broader catalog—after the dystopian nightmares, the floor collapses, the AGS sieges—this poem reads as a manifesto of recalibration. The man who nearly died on the floor has decided that the effort of living, the process of loving even without reciprocation, the striving toward connection even through chronic illness, is itself beautiful. Its brevity is its conviction: nothing more needs to be said.

MARCH 23, 2025 | DAVID PLAHM

Effort

Effort

MAXIMS

Date
03-23-25
Title
Effort
Maxims
""I'm enjoying the effort—even though the prize may be out of reach.""
""The process creates happiness.""
""The striving is beautiful—not because of the end goal, but because of what I become along the way.""
MARCH 23, 2025 | DAVID PLAHM

Effort

Effort

RATING

Date
03-23-25
Title
Effort
Rating
★★★☆☆
7

A poem that succeeds through radical economy. At seven lines, it is among the shortest pieces in the catalog, and its power lies in what it refuses to include: no metaphor, no narrative arc, no imagery, no Muse, no illness. Just a statement of philosophy delivered with the calm certainty of a person who has been through enough to know what matters. The conceptual escalation from effort to journey to process to striving shows careful word selection, each term carrying slightly different weight, building toward the closing line’s synthesis. Placed within the broader catalog, the poem gains enormous contextual gravity—this is the same poet who has documented near-death collapses, dystopian nightmares, and relentless AGS episodes declaring that the effort itself is worth celebrating. That subtext does more work than any metaphor could. Where the poem is limited is also where it finds its strength: the absence of imagery and specificity makes it read closer to aphorism or motivational philosophy than to poetry as such. The language, while precise, does not surprise—”growth,” “happiness,” “beautiful” are the expected vocabulary for this sentiment. A reader encountering this poem without the context of the surrounding catalog might find it slight. But within the sequence, after the harrowing confessions that precede it, this quiet declaration of sufficiency functions as an exhale—the calm center that makes the surrounding storms legible. Sometimes the bravest poem is the simplest one.

Effort

effort

I’m enjoying the effort

Even though the prize may be out of reach

The journey entails a lot of growth

The process creates happiness

The striving is beautiful

Not because of the end goal

But because of what I become along the way.

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