poetry du jour
— by David Plahm
DECEMBER 15, 2024 | DAVID PLAHM

Good Morning

Good Morning

SUMMARY

Date
12-15-24
Title
Good Morning
Topic

A nine-line poem about waking before dawn with both hemispheres of the brain equally lit—the Muse having hijacked independent thought during sleep—leaving the speaker totally consumed and winding through the morning like a honey bee in search of nectar, unable to do anything but write.

Summary

The poem reads like a field note from the moment of waking—raw, pre-coffee, transcribed before the rational mind can edit what the dreaming mind produced. The opening is domestic reportage: “Went to bed early. Woke up very early.” Two sentences, no poetry, just the facts of a body’s schedule. But the third line reveals what happened between those two events: “Dreaming the path of a honey bee.” The speaker didn’t dream about a bee; he dreamed the path of one—he was the bee, tracing its winding, pollen-seeking trajectory through sleep, and he woke still buzzing.

“It’s the Core Buzz” is the poem’s central coinage and its most important contribution to the Honey Bee Bard mythology. The Core Buzz is not a surface hum or a passing inspiration—it is the foundational vibration, the frequency at which the poet operates when fully engaged. The word “Core” places it at the center of the self, beneath personality, beneath choice, beneath conscious control. The Buzz is not decoration; it is infrastructure.

The neurological explanation that follows is the poem’s most surprising formal move: “It’s what happens when the left brain and right brain are equally stimulated, involved, active, and intensely provoked.” The language shifts from poetic to almost clinical—stimulated, involved, active, provoked—as if the speaker is diagnosing his own creative state from the outside. The four adjectives escalate: stimulated (responsive), involved (engaged), active (working), provoked (pushed past comfort). The left-brain/right-brain framework, while neuroscientifically simplified, captures something real about the creative state the poem describes: logic and intuition firing simultaneously, analysis and imagination refusing to take turns, both hemispheres equally consumed.

“The muse takes over and doesn’t allow independent thought or control” is the poem’s most honest and most frightening confession. The Muse is not an inspiration here—she is an occupation. She doesn’t suggest; she takes over. She doesn’t guide; she doesn’t allow. Independent thought—the thing that defines a conscious human being—is suspended. The speaker is no longer a person choosing to write; he is a person being written through.

“It’s all or nothing. / Totally consumed. / In search of nectar.” closes the poem with three descending statements that compress the entire Honey Bee Bard identity into a final image. “All or nothing” is the creative temperament stated as binary code. “Totally consumed” echoes the fire poems (“Incendium,” “Your Gravity”) but replaces combustion with consumption—the speaker is not burning but being eaten, the Muse devouring his autonomy. “In search of nectar” completes the bee metaphor and lands on the word that names the website’s own feature page (Nectar Nuggets), the poet’s enterprise, and the substance a bee exists to find. The poem is a creation myth for the morning ritual: wake, buzz, search, write. No choice in the matter.

DECEMBER 15, 2024 | DAVID PLAHM

Good Morning

Good Morning

MAXIMS

Date
12-15-24
Title
Good Morning
Maxims
""The Core Buzz—what happens when the left brain and right brain are equally stimulated, involved, active, and intensely provoked.""
""The muse takes over and doesn't allow independent thought or control.""
""It's all or nothing. Totally consumed. In search of nectar.""
DECEMBER 15, 2024 | DAVID PLAHM

Good Morning

Good Morning

RATING

Date
12-15-24
Title
Good Morning
Rating
★★★★☆
7

A poem that earns its place in the catalog less through formal achievement than through mythological contribution—”The Core Buzz” is a phrase the catalog has been circling without naming, and this poem pins it down. The concept gives the Honey Bee Bard identity its neurological and creative foundation: the buzz is not a mood or a whim but a bilateral brain state, a condition of total hemispheric engagement that the Muse triggers and the poet cannot override. The domestic opening (went to bed, woke up) grounds the mystical in the mundane—the Core Buzz doesn’t arrive through ritual or invocation but through ordinary sleep interrupted by extraordinary dreaming. The bee-path image connects to the site’s brand identity without feeling like marketing, because the connection is organic: a poet who calls himself the Honeybee Bard wakes up dreaming the path of a bee, and the circularity feels earned rather than constructed. The clinical language in the neurological passage (stimulated, involved, active, provoked) is a tonal risk that pays off—it prevents the poem from floating into vague mysticism and instead insists that the creative state has a mechanism, even if that mechanism is beyond the speaker’s control. The closing three-line descent (all or nothing / totally consumed / in search of nectar) is compressed and effective, each phrase shorter and more absolute than the last, the poem narrowing to a single purpose the way a bee’s flight narrows to a single flower. Where the poem stays in sketch territory rather than fully realized poem is in the middle section’s explanatory tone—the “It’s what happens when” construction reads as description rather than enactment, telling the reader about the Core Buzz rather than performing it. A stanza that put the reader inside the buzz—the winding, the disorientation, the loss of control rendered through syntax or imagery rather than stated as fact—might have given the concept a body as well as a name. But as a definition piece, a naming poem, a myth-of-origin for the morning creative ritual, it delivers exactly what it needs to: the word, the condition, and the honey at the end.

Good Morning

Illustration of a honey bee mid-flight with a winding golden glowing path behind it like a neural pathway against deep pre-dawn indigo toward a luminous white bloom

Went to bed early. Woke up very early
Dreaming the path of a honey bee.
Winding around.
It’s the Core Buzz
It’s what happens when the left brain and right brain are equally stimulated, involved, active,
and intensely provoked.
The muse takes over and doesn’t allow
independent thought or control.
It’s all or nothing.
Totally consumed.
In search of nectar.


Musings to a Muse

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
"Musings to a Muse"
This poem is part of a 28-page poetry collection by David Plahm, released in December 2024. The "Musings to a Muse" collection is now available in hardcover and ebook.
VISIT THE HONEYBEE BARD SHOP
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

Write a comment
Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *
Search categories
Categories
Browse our poetry collection by scrolling the thumbnails below. Click to make a selection and view the full poem.
Slightly surreal illustration of a small gray pebble on a beautiful warm sandstone path casting a disproportionately large shadow through sage and wildflower landscape

Catalyst

My muse— You are the alchemist a wizard

Dramatic illustration of a lightning bolt splitting at impact into electric white-blue and warm rose-gold light against a storm-black sky with scattered star-sparks

Double Tap

If I touch you— skin to soul, will

Vibrant kinetic illustration of swirling tropical coral turquoise and amber around a bright star suggesting Cuban salsa energy and celebration

CUBA!!

CooooooooBaaaaaaaaa! Logically, Geographically, Culturally, Linguistically, Legally, Economically, Strategically,

Dark atmospheric illustration of a tree falling in a windswept night with a faint thread of warm rose-gold light woven through the storm

Resonance

Hushed, I find— knowing the sound of a

Illustration of an open book radiating warm white-gold light upward into surrounding darkness with faint silhouettes drawn toward it

I’m Tired

I’m tired of deaf ears blind eyes ignorant

Atmospheric illustration of black ink flowing from a pen nib onto cream paper with molten scarlet and gold dawn light catching the wet ink surface

Truth

I’m a designer, form follows function, human fit—

Dramatic illustration of silk fabric catching fire where glacial ice-blue meets deep crimson flame at the ignition point

Incendium

I find truth simple, emotions, however, hmmm… Incendium

Minimal illustration of outstretched hands framing a faint shimmering champagne-gold silhouette against cool periwinkle blue

Framed in Air

A lovely visage of beauty walking towards me—

Vibrant illustration of a honky-tonk dance floor with silhouetted dancers in neon pink and electric blue light

Inevitability

Stability, flexibility, and mystery— if that’s what you

Warm illustration of a cluttered late-night desk with glowing screen, cat paw prints on the keyboard, and amber lamplight against deep shadows

My Life

This one is half baked… I scribbled it

Fresh bright illustration of lush green grass glistening with morning dewdrops and bare footprints in warm golden dawn light

Doo Doo

(A life affirming trifle) When I step into

Contemplative illustration of an open hand reaching toward a faint glowing presence in warm ochre and dusty rose tones

I Need To

I need to Materialize Reality Bring everything forward

Ethereal illustration of a gentle breath becoming soft light dispersing into open space in dove gray and lavender tones

The Word

The Word That’s nearly impossible to misspell: God

Textured illustration of a red brick wall and an amber stone wall converging with warm light between them

The Wall

The Wall I’m building one. Red brick. You’re

Warm illustration of origami hearts and flowers being folded with delicate precision

Your OCD

Your OCD— Your Obsession— Obsessively Crafting Devotion Perfect.

Warm whimsical illustration of a cozy domestic scene with golden light and everyday objects

It’s Impossible

Domestic life… It’s Impossible After witnessing— A simple

Dreaming

Dreaming

(about Dreaming about Love) Sailing on a cloud,

Tears Of Joy

My Tears

Tears of joy— wash away the clouds, doubt

cute

Cuteness

Meow The tiny language of love in your

Art(ificial)

Art(ificial)

What a naturally beautiful woman needs: You may

A Rush

A Rush

When the rush of feeling comes from knowing

Every

Every—

Every penny, Every second, Of every dollar, Every

A Shirt

A Shirt

My shirt isn’t much— But it might be

Aurum

Aurum

Gold, gold, gold— draped in finery, a gown

Captured

Captured

Like a wild animal Caught in the cold—

Are You?

Are You?

Ah, bedtime… Ok, this is a sleepy-bye lullaby.

Foundation

Foundation

For a good foundation, all we need are

George Knows

George Knows

George Knows What is beautiful. The furry oracle

Sometimes

Sometimes

Your halo… I can see your halo. It’s

BB's Blues

BB’s Blues

From something heartfelt, to something disastrous, From something

The Educated

The Educated

(In absentia-just flush another toilet) When we have

Epilogue

Epilogue

Yes, a simple addict in that pursuit for

Prologue

Prologue

Addiction – Magic or Despair (If you remove

Hush

Hush

My Darling… Good morning. A spell for you.

Not Always

Not Always

Roses Are red Well… Not always. Violets Are

Beauty demands Truth

There Better Be

Beauty demands Dedication. Dedication is Beautiful. Beauty invites

How Much?

How Much?

How much Can a person Love another? Honestly?

First Sight

First Sight

in that moment between sleeping and waking this

Treasure

A Triptych

Afterlight Wreckage Post Death It was a stark

gelato

Gelato

A glance – a Wonder, A maybe, Like

Wrinkles

Wrinkles?

So, your eyes twinkle, Your laughter sprinkles Us

Simmering

Simmering

What’s the secret sauce? To life. Hahaa, I

My Disease

My Disease

My fingers are twitchin’ My toes are wigglin’

effort

Effort

I’m enjoying the effort Even though the prize

OCPhoto.764745557.088653

A Thought

My arms are not weak. Fragile and disposable.

Again

Again

The fallacy of pursuit of an idea or

OCPhoto.764745557.047957

Arrow

Along my journey Through this world, Wandering Straying

OCPhoto.764745557.0681

IF?

If? I could write a lyric. If? I

blog1

Hope

How obtuse are we, Square x corners everywhere

blog2

Follow You!

Your individual beauty lights my life Your strength

blog4

Your Ear

The next time you look in the mirror,

blog6

Tomorrow

I fell in love with the future Not

Clean architectural illustration of four ascending platforms from solid sandstone through amber glow to vivid teal radiance with a single footprint at the top

You Too

You Too Have Intelligence A birthright Smarts A

Abstract illustration of two flowing melodic lines in burnished copper and deep sapphire intertwining across a cream background with golden sparks at their meeting points

Rhapsody

I’ve read a lot about the word But

Illustration of a design evolving from rough graphite sketch through sepia iterations to a luminous glowing final form across a clean background

Design

Can be an inspirational enlightenment. It can also

Bold illustration of a large weathered gold numeral 5 with patina texture against deep navy, small coral traces of a smile and heart orbiting

Five

Five Years ago A momentous Chance meeting happened.

Rich warm illustration of a dark chocolate bar mid-break with a golden teardrop of melted chocolate suspended at the snap point

Chocolate

You introduced me to a Pound Plus Now

Warm intimate illustration of two arms in a close embrace with soft amber glow at the point of contact against deep burgundy

Only For You

My arms are not weak. Fragile and disposable.

Atmospheric illustration of a weathered wooden door slightly ajar with warm golden and soft rose light spilling through the narrow opening

The Door

Everyone has a door. An opening. An opportunity.

Dreamy soft illustration of a gentle warm spiral tunnel with floating petals and pale gold light at its center in lavender and peach tones

Dreams

Sometimes, I fall down the rabbit hole. Get

Warm stylish illustration of a Parisian café table with croissant, brie, espresso, and red rose with the Eiffel Tower faint in misty background

Virtu

Ah, now we can relax. It’s not that

Warm illustration of a burnished brass compass on an open hand pointing toward a soft dawn glow on the horizon under a twilight sky with faint stars

I WANT

The word I have never… TO Show me

Dramatic illustration of a solar eclipse corona blazing white-gold with raw diamonds in the foreground scattering prismatic light against deep space black

Adore

You are the intense brilliant light surrounding the

Find a Poem by Title or Keywords
AuthorPortrait
David Plahm
Poet, Author, Founder
The Honey Bee Bard
An online gathering place for community and creativity.
subscribe

Join our email list to be updated on new projects and events. Thanks for your interest.