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JUNE 5, 2025 | DAVID PLAHM

A Trinity of Authenticity, Care and Transformation

A Trinity of Authenticity, Care and Transformation

SUMMARY

Date
06-05-25
Title
A Trinity of Authenticity, Care and Transformation
Topic

A multi-movement suite—subtitled "My Personal Greek Tragedy"—that weaves together a prologue to the Muse, a meditation on the exhaustion of performing perfection, an extended pastoral portrait of the Muse gardening in summer heat, and a postscript establishing the HoneyBeeBard's identity. The diamond functions as the poem's central metaphor: the Muse's truth refracts into the poet's verse like light through a prism.

Summary

This is one of the most architecturally ambitious pieces in the early HoneyBeeBard catalog, operating as a four-section suite with prologue and postscript that together constitute something like a manifesto for the entire project. The first section, “Diamonds of Reflection,” establishes the poet’s theory of his own work: the Muse shares her truth and beauty, and the poet’s job is to return it as “diamonds of reflection”—verse that refracts and focuses what was given. The diamond-as-prism metaphor is the poem’s governing image, and the insistence that the Muse’s truth “needs to be spoken. / Aloud.” is a declaration that this poetry exists not as private meditation but as public testimony. The second section, “Perfectly Me,” is a compact and unexpectedly vulnerable interlude about the collapse of the performance of self. The speaker acknowledges that trying to demonstrate perfection is exhausting, that the “stage / Will eventually / Crumble,” and that freedom lies in being “My kind / Of perfect”—imperfect, authentic, open to the other’s opinion. It’s one of the most honest passages about vulnerability in the catalog and anticipates the self-exposure of later poems like “Is It My Jagged Charm?” The centerpiece is “Sunlight and Diamonds,” an extended pastoral that is unlike almost anything else in the collection. Here the Muse is not mythologized but observed: sweating, bending, planting seedlings in July heat, her labor producing literal sustenance. The sensory catalog is extraordinary in its specificity—dewdrops on the upper lip sparkling like diamonds, sweat streaming down a tanned back, hair turning bleach blonde from labor in the sun, hands and feet communing with rich soil. The garden becomes a metaphor for care itself, and the anaphoric “All that labor / All that effort / All that focus / All that care / All that love” links physical gardening to emotional nurturing. The parenthetical asides—”(I hear your stories)” and “(As you’ve told me)”—reveal that this is not direct observation but reconstruction from the Muse’s own narratives, the poet building a portrait from testimony. The “July Santa Claus beard” self-portrait and the Italian grape-crushing fantasy provide comic relief that prevents the pastoral from tipping into reverence, and the closing acknowledgment that the Muse may bring “Joy. / And maybe / Poverty” is the catalog’s most candid admission that this vocation has material costs. The Postscript establishes the HoneyBeeBard persona—”Always, / In search of / Nectar”—and the Italian sign-off “A Presto” (see you soon) promises continuity, framing each poem as one flight in an ongoing foraging journey.

JUNE 5, 2025 | DAVID PLAHM

A Trinity of Authenticity, Care and Transformation

A Trinity of Authenticity, Care and Transformation

MAXIMS

Date
06-05-25
Title
A Trinity of Authenticity, Care and Transformation
Maxims
""Diamonds of reflection—focusing your truth, your beauty, your stories, in verse""
""My stage will eventually crumble. Then I will be free to be my kind of perfect""
""The essence of life is worth every penny""
JUNE 5, 2025 | DAVID PLAHM

A Trinity of Authenticity, Care and Transformation

A Trinity of Authenticity, Care and Transformation

RATING

Date
06-05-25
Title
A Trinity of Authenticity, Care and Transformation
Rating
★★★★☆
8

An ambitious, sprawling suite that functions as both ars poetica and love letter, with a pastoral centerpiece that ranks among the most sensorily vivid passages in the entire catalog. The “Sunlight and Diamonds” section is the poem’s triumph—a sustained act of observation that earns its length through the accumulation of physical detail: sweat as diamonds, soil communion, bleach-blonde hair from sun exposure, the barn cat with “all fours pointing up” keeping one eye on the rabbit. By grounding the Muse in labor rather than abstraction, Plahm achieves something rare in the collection: the beloved as a working body, beautiful precisely because she is productive, dirty, and exhausted. The parenthetical revelations that this scene is reconstructed from the Muse’s own stories add another layer—the poet as listener, rebuilding the beloved’s world from fragments of conversation. “Perfectly Me” is a compact gem within the larger structure, and its admission that the performance of perfection is unsustainable anticipates the catalog’s later explorations of authenticity and imperfection. The diamond-as-prism metaphor holds across all sections, providing structural unity that the tonal range (devotional, vulnerable, pastoral, comic, philosophical) might otherwise undermine. The self-aware humor—the Santa Claus beard, the grape-crushing fantasy, the “Buzzingly / Bizzy” postscript—keeps the reverence from calcifying, and the candid “maybe / Poverty” is the kind of bathetic honesty that makes Plahm’s best work credible. Where the piece slightly overstays is in the Prologue section, which circles the diamond metaphor one or two times more than it needs to before the pastoral earns it through concrete imagery. But as a foundational document for the HoneyBeeBard project—establishing the poet’s relationship to his Muse, his theory of verse as refraction, and his willingness to trade material security for creative purpose—it’s indispensable.

A Trinity of Authenticity, Care and Transformation

A Trinity of Authenticity, Care and Transformation

My Personal Greek Tragedy

Diamonds of Reflection

(Prologue: To My Muse)

I graciously accept
What you are willing to share—
Your honesty, integrity,
Your intelligence, experience,
Your care, attentiveness,
Your smile, graciousness,
Your truthfulness, your beauty.
Gifts, treasures,
I adore.

And I try
To return it—
Through my verse,
A reverence of thought,
A mirror of you.

This is my reply:
Diamonds of reflection—
Focusing your truth,
Your beauty,
Your stories,
In verse,
From my mind’s eye

The following—
A heartfelt response
To your graciousness.

You:
My muse,
A framework of illuminating light,
The prismatic reflection
From your radiant diamond—
Rainbows dance
In my mind
Focusing your truth,
Your truthfulness,
Enhancing your beauty

Creating simple stories
I tell—
Oh, what a spark.

Pay attention—
To your precious diamond
That lit
this
creation—
It is
Precious truth.

That needs to be spoken.
Aloud.

 

Perfectly Me

If I didn’t try to demonstrate
How perfect I am,
How would you ever know
I’m not?

But,
I’m going to be
Exhausted
Keeping up the
Facade.

My stage
Will eventually
Crumble

Then
I will be
Free
To be
My kind
Of perfect

And
Your opinion—
Free
To be expressed—
Appreciated.

 

Sunlight and Diamonds

In the Heat of the Day
(Watering the Garden)

The glistening dewdrops
Decorating your upper lip
Sparkling like tiny diamonds
In the bright sun

Brilliant light
Under a deep blue sky
Cloudless, wide, alive

The beaded glistening
Of your arms and legs
As the tiny prisms
Fall into the soil

The smell of freshly
Tilled rich dirt, fertilizer
And new mulch

Your back
Strong and tanned
With streaks of sweat
Streaming down—
Watering the young plants

As you bend over
Plant another seedling
That tiny piece of new life
Receives sustenance
(I hear your stories)

Your hair
Closely coupled
To your head and neck—
The pearls of labor focusing the sun,
Turning your long strands
Bleach blonde

The rabbit comes
For your gifted delicacies
The deer grunts, cautious
That lounging barn cat
With all fours pointing up
Keeping one eye on Mr. Rabbit
(As you’ve told me)

Your hands and feet
Communing with the rich soil
Working deep
Toward completion—
Effort,
Final satisfaction

The first flowers
Not long to wait
The first fruits
Shortly after
Bursting into fullness
As the sun
And your diamond sweat
Continue to nurture

Now covered
From head to toe
In sweat, dirt and
That earthy smell
I love
Of labor deservedly given
The satisfaction
Of exhaustion

The neighbors
Wavering between
Envy and awe
Waiting to share
Your labor’s fruits

All that labor
All that effort
All that focus
All that care
All that love
Turned into dedication
For tiny little
Green leaves

The imprints of your hands
Impressed around their
Delicate shoots

The mulch—
Of intimate care

While I—
In my July Santa Claus beard—
Am a witness
In awe
Of a beautiful diamond
In physical form.

The waves of heat
Washing over me

Meanwhile, still in my rabbit hole…
(Hahaa
If I was in Italy
I’d be dying
To crush grapes
Under my feet—
The visceral exhilaration
Of beginning
To create

The
Best
That
Life
Can
Offer:
Vino.)

 

“I’m a humble storyteller”
My inspiration?
Life
And a Muse
That brings me
Joy.
And maybe
Poverty,

But,
The
Essence of life
Is worth
Every penny.

Sleep,
Sleep,
Sleep,

My Muse
Tonight
Will bring dreams
Of peace

That I
Will embrace.

<Postscript>

I am the
HoneyBeeBard

Always,
In search of
Nectar
Hahaa
Buzzingly
Bizzy

Acts of creation
Labors of love
Capturing
Life’s sweetest offerings
Another flight
Soon to come.
Till next time
A Presto.

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