
Ah, Only You
(My Muse, can create this) Frame of mind
An Easter poem about missed boats and second chances—the speaker admits he'll someday forget his own name but never her smile, confesses they missed the big cruise, then claims Easter's rebirth as permission to unfold a future of tall tales and beautiful laughter, closing with the ancient aphorism reversed: life is short, but your art—you—is forever.
The poem opens with the oldest memento mori in the language—”Life is short”—and immediately personalizes it with an image of cognitive decline: “Someday soon I’ll be so old / I can’t remember my own name.” The “soon” is the line’s sharpest word, converting the abstract inevitability of aging into something imminent, something the speaker can see approaching. But the next line performs the poem’s central act of defiance: “But, I will never forget your smile.” Memory will fail everywhere except the one place it matters. The name will go; the smile will stay. The hierarchy is declared in three lines: identity is expendable; the beloved’s smile is not.
The missed-boat confession is the poem’s most emotionally exposed passage: “We missed the boat / The big cruise / What set sail / Was a history ago.” The cruise metaphor is both literal enough to picture (a ship, a departure, a dock left standing) and metaphorical enough to ache (the relationship that should have been, the voyage never taken together). “A history ago” is a Plahm coinage that compresses the distance—not years ago or decades ago but a history ago, as if the missed opportunity belongs to a previous civilization rather than a previous chapter.
“So many tales between lost / What should have been / What could have been / We will never know” is the poem’s most honest stanza and its most restrained. The speaker doesn’t dramatize the loss or assign blame; he simply names the unknowable: the alternate timeline where the boat was caught, the cruise was taken, and the tales were shared rather than lost between. The restraint is the grief.
Then the pivot: “But, It’s Easter.” Two words, a comma, a season. Easter arrives as both calendar fact and philosophical argument—if resurrection is possible for a deity, then renewal is possible for a relationship. “A rebirth and renewal / A future untold to unfold” uses the fold/unfold wordplay that recurs across the catalog (“Perfectly Upside Down,” “Fluidly Fractured,” the origami thread): the future is a folded thing waiting to be opened, and Easter is the occasion for opening it.
The closing achieves the poem’s most memorable formal move. “Smile / That beautiful smile / Laugh / That beautiful laugh” uses the imperative followed by its own echo—the command and the description are the same gesture, the poem asking for the smile while already seeing it. “I will see and feel that / Even after I’m gone” extends the opening’s defiance past death itself: not just remembering the smile while alive but perceiving it after dying.
The final line—”Art is long. Your art, you, is forever”—invokes Ars longa, vita brevis (Hippocrates via Seneca), the aphorism that art outlasts the artist. But Plahm performs a crucial substitution: the Muse is not the artist; she is the art. Her existence—her smile, her laugh, her presence—is the artwork that will outlast both of their lives. The comma-splice “Your art, you, is forever” is grammatically awkward and emotionally precise: the art and the person are the same thing, inseparable, and the sentence structure fuses them by refusing to choose between them.
A poem that covers enormous emotional ground—mortality, cognitive decline, missed opportunity, Easter resurrection, the persistence of beauty past death—in thirty lines without ever feeling rushed. The opening three-line sequence (life is short / I’ll forget my name / but never your smile) is one of the most efficient emotional setups in the catalog, establishing the stakes (mortality), the fear (forgetting), and the defiance (the smile survives) in a single breath. The missed-boat confession is the poem’s bravest passage because it admits failure without melodrama—the speaker doesn’t rage against the missed cruise; he simply notes that it sailed, that it was a history ago, and that the tales between are lost. The restraint is more moving than any dramatic alternative because it sounds like a man who has processed the loss rather than performing it. The Easter pivot is structurally well-placed—arriving exactly when the poem risks settling into elegy, it redirects the entire emotional trajectory from backward-looking (what was missed) to forward-looking (what unfolds). “Beauty to unfold, behold and enfold” is a three-verb cascade where each rhyming action deepens the relationship to beauty: first you open it, then you witness it, then you wrap yourself in it. The closing ars longa inversion is the poem’s intellectual climax and its most original contribution: collapsing the Muse and the art into a single entity (“Your art, you”) makes the ancient aphorism personal rather than abstract. Where the poem has minor unevenness is in the “It’s not that complicated” passage, which restates the simplicity theme (“sometimes simple, other times complicated, should just be simple”) more than necessary before arriving at the imperative “Smile / That beautiful smile.” But the final four lines—seeing and feeling the smile after death, then the ars longa close—are among the strongest endings in the catalog. A poem that sails past the missed boat and finds something better on the shore.
Life is short.
Someday soon I’ll be so old
I can’t remember my own name
But, I will never forget your smile
That will live for eternity
For some unknown reason
We missed the boat
The big cruise
What set sail
Was a history ago
So many tales between lost
What should have been
What could have been
We will never know
But, It’s Easter
A rebirth and renewal
A future untold to unfold
So many experiences
To look forward to
New tall tales to tell
Emotions to expose and respond to
Beauty to unfold, behold and enfold
Sometimes it’s simple
Other times it’s complicated
From this point forward
It really should just be simple
It’s not that complicated
Smile
That beautiful smile
Laugh
That beautiful laugh
I will see and feel that
Even after I’m gone
Art is long. Your art, you, is forever.
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"Musings to a Muse"
This poem is part of a 28-page poetry collection by David Plahm, released in
December 2024. The "Musings to a Muse" collection is now available in hardcover and ebook.
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