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DECEMBER 15, 2024 | DAVID PLAHM

Chocolate

Chocolate

SUMMARY

Date
12-15-24
Title
Chocolate
Topic

A compact love poem built on a shared chocolate ritual—a Trader Joe's Pound Plus bar that seals a friendship into permanence—where melting chocolate becomes tears, tears become rivers of sweetness, and the speaker asks the beloved to share those tears because they are not grief but the sweet tears of life itself.

Summary

The poem begins with a specific, concrete, brand-name detail: “You introduced me / to a Pound Plus.” The Pound Plus is Trader Joe’s signature oversized chocolate bar—17.6 ounces of Belgian chocolate that has achieved cult status among shoppers. By naming it rather than saying “chocolate” generically, the poem roots its metaphor in a real object, a real store, a real shared moment. Someone handed this bar to the speaker, and the gesture was transformative enough to warrant a poem. The introduction is framed as a social event—”introduced me to”—as if the chocolate were a person, a third party in the relationship, a mutual friend who would bind the other two together.

“Now we shall be friends / forever and ever” converts the chocolate introduction into a covenant. The phrasing borrows from fairy tales and wedding vows (“forever and ever”), and the word “friends” is deliberately chosen over “lovers”—this is a poem about companionship sealed by shared taste rather than romance sealed by passion. The chocolate is the treaty; the friendship is the nation it founds.

“And forever shall / chocolate be / what unites us” elevates the bar from snack to sacrament. The syntax is slightly archaic (“forever shall”), giving the declaration the cadence of a proclamation or a toast, and “what unites us” positions chocolate as the binding agent—the thing that holds the relationship together the way sugar holds a ganache.

The poem’s most interesting move is the tear-chocolate fusion: “When chocolate melts / my eyes tear / My tears become / rivers of sweet / delectable chocolate.” The causality is deliberately circular: chocolate melts, which produces tears, which become chocolate, which would melt, which would produce more tears. The cycle is self-sustaining—a perpetual motion machine of sweetness and emotion. The tears are not sadness; they are the body’s involuntary response to something so good it overwhelms the senses. Anyone who has eaten truly excellent chocolate knows the feeling: a pleasure so concentrated it borders on weeping.

The closing—”Share my tears / for they are the / sweet tears of life”—is the poem’s most generous gesture. The speaker doesn’t just cry chocolate tears; he offers them. The sharing completes the poem’s arc: the beloved shared chocolate with the speaker (the introduction), and now the speaker shares tears with the beloved (the reciprocation). The “sweet tears of life” converts the phrase from its usual association (the bitter tears of loss) into something nourishing—tears that are not salt but sugar, not grief but gratitude.

DECEMBER 15, 2024 | DAVID PLAHM

Chocolate

Chocolate

MAXIMS

Date
12-15-24
Title
Chocolate
Maxims
""You introduced me to a Pound Plus—now we shall be friends forever and ever.""
""When chocolate melts, my eyes tear—my tears become rivers of sweet delectable chocolate.""
""Share my tears, for they are the sweet tears of life.""
DECEMBER 15, 2024 | DAVID PLAHM

Chocolate

Chocolate

RATING

Date
12-15-24
Title
Chocolate
Rating
★★★☆☆
7

A poem that finds genuine tenderness inside a seemingly trivial subject—a chocolate bar—by following the metaphor far enough to discover something real about shared experience and emotional overflow. The Pound Plus detail is the poem’s smartest choice: by naming the specific product, the poem avoids the vagueness that most chocolate-as-love poems fall into and instead plants itself in a particular aisle, a particular brand, a particular moment of being handed something and having your life subtly altered by it. The circular tear-chocolate-tear logic is the poem’s most formally interesting element—tears that become chocolate that produces more tears creates an image of emotional abundance that refreshes itself endlessly, which is a better description of a sustaining friendship than most poems achieve. The “sweet tears of life” closing inverts the conventional “bitter tears” formula with such quiet confidence that the reader may not notice the reversal happening, which is a sign that the image has earned its place. The fairy-tale cadence of “forever and ever” and the proclamatory “forever shall” give the poem a formality that elevates the chocolate bar from grocery item to reliquary without being heavy-handed about it. Where the poem stays light is in its middle stanzas, which trace the metaphor without complicating it—there is no moment of doubt, no melting that goes wrong, no chocolate that disappoints. The poem’s emotional register is uniform (warmth, sweetness, generosity), which makes it comforting but also predictable. A stanza acknowledging the bitterness inside the chocolate (dark chocolate is bitter before it is sweet) might have given the “sweet tears” closing more contrast to push against. But the poem knows its occasion—a shared pleasure, a sealed friendship, an offered tear—and delivers it cleanly. A poem that proves the best friendships begin with someone handing you something delicious and saying try this.

Chocolate

Rich warm illustration of a dark chocolate bar mid-break with a golden teardrop of melted chocolate suspended at the snap point

You introduced me
to a Pound Plus

Now we shall be friends
forever and ever

And forever shall
chocolate be
what unites us.

When chocolate melts
my eyes tear

My tears become
rivers of sweet
delectable chocolate

Share my tears
for they are the
sweet tears of life


Musings to a Muse

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"Musings to a Muse"
This poem is part of a 28-page poetry collection by David Plahm, released in December 2024. The "Musings to a Muse" collection is now available in hardcover and ebook.
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