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— by David Plahm
SEPTEMBER 20, 2025 | DAVID PLAHM

A Rush

A Rush

SUMMARY

Date
09-20-25
Title
A Rush
Topic

The poem captures the exhilarating sensation of creative and romantic fulfillment—that moment when excellence and beauty converge, and the poet wonders whether such a rush can be sustained or if this is all there is.

Summary

Deceptively simple in its structure, this poem maps the anxious joy that follows any peak experience. Plahm begins with the afterglow of accomplishment (“you did something excellent / Beautiful, enticing, delicious”), then pivots to the existential questions that accompany it: How do you follow that? Keep that? The poem’s genius lies in its answer—the rush isn’t about replication but recognition. The repetition of “When I can tell you are beautiful / and I know you are beautiful” distinguishes between perception and certainty, between seeing and knowing. The closing declaration (“And I know / It will continue”) resolves the earlier anxiety with quiet confidence. This is a love poem that doubles as a meditation on sustaining creative momentum, with the Muse serving as both romantic figure and artistic inspiration.

SEPTEMBER 20, 2025 | DAVID PLAHM

A Rush

A Rush

MAXIMS

Date
09-20-25
Title
A Rush
Maxims
""When the rush of feeling comes from knowing you did something excellent.""
""How do you follow that? Keep that? Continue that?""
""When the rush of knowing rushes in—I know you are. My Muse.""
SEPTEMBER 20, 2025 | DAVID PLAHM

A Rush

A Rush

RATING

Date
09-20-25
Title
A Rush
Rating
★★★★☆
8

A compact, emotionally resonant piece that accomplishes more with less. The short, breath-like lines create a sense of urgency that mirrors the subject matter—the rush itself. Plahm wisely resists over-explaining; the poem raises its questions and trusts the reader to sit with them. The distinction between telling and knowing beauty adds philosophical depth without pretension. The final pivot to “My Muse” earns its capital M through the emotional work that precedes it. Some readers may find the middle section’s questions too abstract, and the poem’s brevity leaves certain ideas underdeveloped. But the closing assurance (“It will continue”) lands with earned conviction—a poet who has found his anchor.

A Rush

A Rush

When the rush
of feeling
comes from knowing
you did something
excellent

Beautiful,
enticing,
delicious.

Where will that lead?
I ask myself.

How do you
follow that?
Keep that?
Continue that?

Is this—
it?
All we know?

Only you
can tell me.

When I
can tell
you are beautiful
and I
know
you are beautiful

When the rush
of feeling
of knowing
rushes in—
I know
you are.

My Muse.

And I know
It will continue.

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