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JUNE 23, 2025 | DAVID PLAHM

My Auction, My trigger?

My Auction, My trigger?

SUMMARY

Date
06-23-25
Title
My Auction, My trigger?
Topic

A minimalist preamble poem that functions as an overture to the HoneyBeeBard catalog—offering the speaker's life experience up for bid as a "soulful auction" and inviting the reader to participate in something unknown, beautiful, and deeply personal.

Summary

At just over thirty words of substance, this is among the shortest and most enigmatic poems in the HoneyBeeBard catalog, and its power lies entirely in what it withholds. The poem operates as a threshold: it stands between the reader and the body of work that follows, and its job is to make the reader step through. The opening “sometimes… / unknown—” establishes mystery as the poem’s governing mode, and the descending list that follows—short story, play, poem, nightmare, survival, potential, thought—reads like a table of contents for the human experience, each item presented without explanation or hierarchy, as if the speaker is laying out everything he has to offer and letting the reader decide what to pick up. The pivot from “A nightmare” to “A survival” to “A potential” traces an emotional arc in three lines that many poems need three pages to achieve: life is terrible, life continues, life might yet become something. The central claim—”A beauty / I’ve found”—is delivered with the simplicity of testimony, and the assertion that “We / should / all / experience” it extends the personal into the universal without insisting on it. The word “Rhapsody” is the poem’s most loaded term, carrying both its musical meaning (an ecstatic, free-form composition) and its emotional one (intense delight), and the speaker’s claim to have experienced it positions the entire catalog as evidence. The closing—”here’s / my / soulful auction—”—is the poem’s most original gesture: the speaker frames his life and work not as a gift or a performance but as an auction, something of value offered to whoever is willing to bid. The question mark in the title (“My trigger?”) introduces uncertainty about what sets the whole process in motion, suggesting the speaker himself doesn’t fully understand why he writes. At 33 likes, the engagement is remarkably strong for a poem this brief and abstract, suggesting it functions as an effective gateway to the catalog. Positioned between “From Turbulence to a Dream—Take One” and “Take Two,” it reads as the hinge between crisis and recovery.

JUNE 23, 2025 | DAVID PLAHM

My Auction, My trigger?

My Auction, My trigger?

MAXIMS

Date
06-23-25
Title
My Auction, My trigger?
Maxims
""A short story, a play, a poem, a nightmare, a survival, a potential, a thought.""
""A beauty I've found—we should all experience.""
""Here's my soulful auction.""
JUNE 23, 2025 | DAVID PLAHM

My Auction, My trigger?

My Auction, My trigger?

RATING

Date
06-23-25
Title
My Auction, My trigger?
Rating
★★★☆☆
7

A poem that operates almost entirely on compression and implication, and whose effectiveness depends heavily on its placement within the catalog rather than its standalone merit. The descending list of possibilities—story, play, poem, nightmare, survival, potential, thought—is a genuinely elegant structural move, each item arriving with equal weight and without commentary, creating the feeling of a hand sweeping across a table of offerings. The pivot from nightmare to survival to potential is the poem’s emotional backbone, and those three lines do more narrative work than their simplicity suggests. The “soulful auction” metaphor is the poem’s most distinctive contribution: it reframes the poet-reader relationship as a transaction of value, where the speaker puts his experience up for bid and the reader decides what it’s worth. This is both humble (the value is determined by others) and confident (the speaker believes the auction is worth attending). At 33 likes, the engagement is impressive for a poem that offers so little text and so much white space, suggesting it works as an invitation—readers who encounter it want to see what’s being auctioned. The limitation is inherent to the form: a poem this compressed and abstract necessarily sacrifices the imagery, emotional texture, and structural invention that distinguish the catalog’s strongest work. It reads less as a complete poem and more as a prologue or gateway—a doorway rather than a room—and its meaning deepens primarily in context with the poems that surround it. But as a statement of intent, an invitation to enter the HoneyBeeBard world, and a thirty-word distillation of what the entire project is about, it does its job with economy and quiet confidence.

My Auction, My trigger?

My Auction, My trigger?

sometimes…
unknown—

A short story
A play
A poem
A nightmare
A survival
A potential
A thought

A beauty
I’ve found

We
should
all
experience

A
Rhapsody
I’ve
experienced

A
simple
life experience

You,
may
never
have experienced

here’s
my
soulful auction—

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