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JUNE 3, 2025 | DAVID PLAHM

I’ve Been Hexed! I’ve Been Blessed!

I’ve Been Hexed!  I’ve Been Blessed!

SUMMARY

Date
06-03-25
Title
I’ve Been Hexed! I’ve Been Blessed!
Topic

A numerological love poem that meditates on the number six as simultaneously hex (curse) and blessing, using it as a framework for exploring how the Muse's enchantment over the poet operates as both fate and comfort. Also functions as a greeting card available in the HoneyBeeBard Shop.

Summary

The poem’s central move is etymological: “hex” derives from the Greek “hex” meaning six, and Plahm exploits this double meaning across the entire piece—the number six is both a mathematical fact and a spell. The bolded 6 appears four times as a visual anchor, each repetition opening a new facet of the number’s significance. The first stanza establishes the ambiguity: “6 / Years / What a big number! / Magical / It could be / A spell / Or a curse.” The “6 Years” anchors the poem in autobiography—a specific duration of connection with the Muse—while “big number” immediately ironizes itself because six is, of course, small. The second stanza corrects this: “6 / Is a small number / But / Significant / Strong, geometric, balanced / Sacred.” The adjective list—”geometric, balanced, sacred”—invokes the hexagon, nature’s most efficient shape (honeycomb cells, snowflakes), which links directly to the HoneyBeeBard identity. The bee’s architecture is hexagonal; the poet’s enchantment is hexagonal; the number that measures their connection is hexagonal. It’s the kind of hidden structural rhyme that rewards readers who know the brand. The third and fourth stanzas deepen the hex-as-enchantment metaphor, and “Solved? / Or just another / Beautiful guess” is one of the poem’s best moments—the question mark after “Solved” refuses the certainty the word promises, and “beautiful guess” reframes uncertainty as aesthetic rather than anxious. The emotional turn comes in the fifth stanza: “My / Uncertainty / Might be / My / Quiet truth / My / Hex of / Comfort.” This is the poem’s thesis—that not-knowing can itself be a form of protection, that the hex (curse/spell/six) provides shelter precisely because it remains unresolved. “A perfect number / For an imperfect world” employs the mathematical definition (six is literally a “perfect number,” the sum of its proper divisors: 1+2+3=6) as romantic metaphor. The closing—”I’ve been / Stirred”—returns to the opening instruction (“Stir Gently”) and completes the incantation: the spell has been cast, the stirring is done, the poet has been transformed. The greeting card format suits this poem well—its compact, incantatory structure and the bolded 6 as visual design element make it one of the more naturally giftable pieces in the catalog.

JUNE 3, 2025 | DAVID PLAHM

I’ve Been Hexed! I’ve Been Blessed!

I’ve Been Hexed!  I’ve Been Blessed!

MAXIMS

Date
06-03-25
Title
I’ve Been Hexed! I’ve Been Blessed!
Maxims
""A perfect number for an imperfect world""
""My uncertainty might be my quiet truth, my hex of comfort""
""True beauty and quiet perfection, like a hex of enchantment, will always find its way to someone's heart""
JUNE 3, 2025 | DAVID PLAHM

I’ve Been Hexed! I’ve Been Blessed!

I’ve Been Hexed!  I’ve Been Blessed!

RATING

Date
06-03-25
Title
I’ve Been Hexed! I’ve Been Blessed!
Rating
★★★★☆
8

A cleverly constructed poem that achieves more structural coherence than its light, incantatory surface suggests. The hex/six/spell triple-meaning is the poem’s engine, and Plahm exploits it fully without over-explaining—the etymological connection is there for readers who catch it, and the poem still works for those who don’t. The bolded 6 as visual punctuation gives the piece a graphic quality that anticipates its greeting card afterlife, and the progression from “big number” to “small number” to “perfect number” traces a genuine philosophical arc about how significance operates independently of scale. The mathematical precision (six as a perfect number) woven into a love poem is the kind of cross-disciplinary reach that characterizes Plahm’s more intellectually ambitious work—the same impulse that drives the neuroscience vocabulary in other pieces. The “Stir Gently” framing as recipe/incantation sets up the closing “I’ve been / Stirred” with satisfying circularity. Where the poem falls slightly short is in some of the middle stanzas, where the adjective lists (“Strong, geometric, balanced / Sacred / A logical pattern / Of harmony, balance, togetherness”) accumulate without the compression that the best lines achieve—”beautiful guess” and “hex of comfort” do more work in fewer words than some of the surrounding material. But the 26 likes reflect genuine audience connection, and the hexagonal resonance with the HoneyBeeBard brand (bees build in hexagons) is an elegant piece of thematic architecture that links the poet’s personal mythology to his creative identity.

I’ve Been Hexed! I’ve Been Blessed!

hexed

Here’s My Incantation! Stir Gently.

6
Years
What a big number!
Magical
It could be
A spell
Or a curse

6
Is a small number
But
Significant
Strong, geometric, balanced
Sacred
A logical pattern
Of harmony, balance, togetherness

6
That “Hex”
Is
Enchantment
A spell
Over me
That will last
Forevermore

6
Might be
My
Fate
My
Mystery
Solved?
Or just another
Beautiful guess.

My
Uncertainty
Might be
My
Quiet truth
My
Hex of
Comfort

A perfect number
For an imperfect world
That Hex
Protects
Me

And still
Mystifies
And unravels
Me

I’ve been
Stirred

True beauty
And quiet perfection,
Like a hex of Enchantment,
Will always find
Its way
To someone’s heart.
The true significance of
6

 
 
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