
Perfume on a Stranger’s Coat
Can I? I might need ears of wax—
A blues-inflected love poem that wrestles the Muse from dream into reality, using a recurring refrain—"There's a…one"—as both musical hook and philosophical assertion, while honoring the beloved's resilience forged through hardship the speaker can witness but never fully share.
This poem operates as a slow dissolution of the boundary between fantasy and truth, and the blues form is its perfect vehicle. The opening establishes the beloved as apparition—”a dream, a fantasy”—set against Southern Gothic imagery: a porch swing creaking in rhythm, blues pulsing on a radio, black-and-white photographs at Grandma’s house. These details ground the poem in a specific emotional geography, a world where memory and longing share the same room. The recurring refrain—”There’s a…one / and only you— / There’s a…one”—functions like a blues turnaround, each repetition shifting context: from romantic declaration to spiritual recognition to final naming of the Muse. The poem’s most quietly powerful passage acknowledges the beloved’s separate history: “harsh streets, / and twisted necks / forged your truth— / endurance, fortitude.” The phrase “twisted necks” carries unmistakable weight, suggesting struggle and survival the speaker cannot pretend to know firsthand. His response is not appropriation but adjacency: “I can’t tread your path… / But I can / walk beside you.” This is love defined as respectful parallel rather than merger. By the final stanza, the title phrase has undergone complete transformation—”my fantasy blues” no longer describes longing for an illusion but the lived experience of finding truth more extraordinary than any dream could manufacture.
A warm, bluesy meditation that achieves something rare in Plahm’s catalog: genuine humility before the beloved’s separate history. Where many of his poems celebrate the Muse through the lens of the speaker’s transformation, this one pauses to acknowledge that she exists independently of his gaze, shaped by experiences—”harsh streets, and twisted necks”—he can only honor, not claim. The porch-swing opening is atmospheric and assured, establishing blues tonality through rhythm and image rather than mere declaration. The “There’s a…one” refrain works beautifully as musical structure, its ellipsis creating the hesitation of a blues singer reaching for a note, and each recurrence deepens rather than repeats. The poem’s philosophical core—that truth surpasses fantasy, that the real beloved exceeds the imagined one—is delivered without sentimentality. Minor weakness: the middle sections occasionally feel loose, and some stanzas could be tightened without losing their blues cadence. The phrase “my world / plants its root / in you” is a lovely inversion of botanical imagery that earns its place. The closing unity of dream and truth, where “fantasy blues” becomes a term of celebration rather than lament, provides genuine resolution. A poem that understands the blues not as sadness but as the alchemy of turning pain into something you can sway to.
You’re still…
a dream, a fantasy.
A slow breeze hums with melancholy,
blues pulse low on the radio,
porch swing sways,
its creak a soft, slow rhythm.
Black-and-white memories—
framed at Grandma’s.
There’s a…
one
and only you—
There’s a…one.
No fantasy,
no faded photograph,
not just blues I bear—
your smile whispers,
you’re alive.
Not faint cadence
of lost memory—
Beyond the porch,
your story sings:
Wisdom etched in living,
harsh streets,
and twisted necks
forged your truth—
endurance, fortitude.
Still, there’s…
one
true smile—
There’s a…one.
I can’t tread your path—
those streets,
a distant pulse
from mine.
But I can
walk beside you.
Your laugh, your light,
those radiant eyes,
my world
plants its root
in you.
There’s a…
one
sole muse—
There’s a…one.
No fantasy, only truth—
my fantasy blues,
they live in you.
My heart—
beats for you—
Smile for me,
my heart
finds peace
in your light.
You’re still…
a dream, a fantasy,
your smile
now my living truth—
my truth alive…
my fantasy blues
alive in you, my muse.
There’s a…one.




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