
Perfume on a Stranger’s Coat
Can I? I might need ears of wax—
A playful anatomy of flirtation, cataloging the beloved's small gestures and micro-expressions as a "quiet, subtle symphony" of unspoken desire.
Framed by animal sounds—”Meow” at the opening, “Bow Wow” at the close—this poem reads like a field guide to the body language of attraction. Plahm approaches his subject with the attentiveness of a naturalist, documenting each small signal: dimpled knees, freckled toes, a “winking elbow,” a thumb that “waves a secret hello.” The beloved is rendered not as a static portrait but as a constellation of movements and micro-tells. There’s genuine observational wit here: the temple that “hums with welcome,” the earlobe that “perks when I joke,” the eyebrow that “lifts with critique,” the little finger that “quivers” with “feigned disinterest.” The poem builds toward its thesis: that love communicates through a “hidden, quiet, subtle symphony”—all those involuntary responses the body makes before the mind can censor them. The dynamic between the two figures is playful and reciprocal: she evades, he notices; she purrs, he watches. The closing “What a flirt. Bow Wow” perfectly matches the opening “Meow,” creating a call-and-response between two creatures circling each other in the eternal dance. It’s a poem that celebrates the erotic charge of the almost-touch, the not-quite-said.
“Cuteness” is delightful in its specificity. Where many love poems content themselves with generalities (eyes, lips, hands), Plahm goes granular: dimpled knees, freckled toes, a quivering little finger, a perking earlobe. This attention to anatomical detail creates a portrait that feels genuinely observed rather than conventionally imagined. The animal-sound frame (“Meow” / “Bow Wow”) is a smart structural choice, establishing the poem’s playful register and suggesting that flirtation operates at a preverbal, almost instinctual level. The catalogue structure suits the content—accumulating details until they coalesce into the “symphony” of the penultimate stanza. A few images land with particular force: “Your thumb waves a secret hello” and “The little finger quivers / feigned disinterest” capture something true about how attraction telegraphs itself through minor movements. If there’s a limitation, it’s that the poem stays consistently light; it doesn’t risk the tonal shifts that might make it more surprising. But that’s also its charm—this is a poem that knows exactly what it wants to be: a tender, slightly goofy appreciation of the body’s unspoken eloquence. In the collection’s emotional landscape, it provides welcome levity.
Meow
The tiny language
of love
in your small gestures.
Dimpled knees
Freckled toes
A winking elbow
Your thumb waves
a secret hello.
The corner of your eye
a vision of welcome.
The press of your lips
invites inspection.
Your temple hums
with welcome.
Your earlobe perks
when I joke.
The eyebrow lifts
with critique
Your little finger quivers
feigned disinterest
Your voice purrs
In a whisper
The eyes go left
to avoid my right.
The butt shifts right
to evade my advance.
You’re so adorable,
with your hidden,
quiet, subtle symphony,
of cute love.
What a flirt.
Bow Wow.




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